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TP7 - Writing Task
B2 level

Description

In this lesson, students will learn about writing with appropriate (specifically neutral) tone in the context of film reviews.

Materials

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Main Aims

  • To provide product writing practice of a review in the context of films and cinema.

Subsidiary Aims

  • To provide vocabulary practice in the context of film and cinema reviews.
  • To give students awareness of the tonal nuances between formal, neutral and informal commentary.

Procedure

Lead-In (0-5 minutes) • To introduce the topic to the students and activate their schemata

I will put up some famous movie posters. I will model some answers to the questions: "Which is your favourite film here?" "Why do you like it?" "Are there any films here that you don't like?" I will then split them into pairs and get them to answer. I will finally get them to feedback some of their answers in OCFB.

Text Work - Gist (0-5 minutes) • To provide students with an initial familiarity with the text

Students will have 5 minutes to suggest the genre of the movie Jaws based on the text. After that, we will discuss the text.

Text Work - Intensive (0-5 minutes) • To identify the target language and key elements of the text.

I will then give the students a list of labels that go with the text, for sections such as: Film Title, Rating, Introduction etc etc. We will do the first together. I will give them 4 minutes to map them to sections of the text. They can then check their answers in pairs before OCFB.

Language Preparation (0-5 minutes) • To prepare students for the written text, by giving them time to

I will explain to students that film reviews use neutral tones rather than overly casual or formal tones. I will give them some examples of informal, neutral and formal exponents of the same function, and explain the differences to them. I will then put a phrase on the board and get them to choose if it is neutral, formal or casual. I will then give out a sheet where they select whether a phrase is formal, neutral or casual. Some will be multiple. They will have five minutes, then a minute to check in pairs, then OCFB.

Production Stage (0-15 minutes) • To give the students practice writing a review, familiarising them with both the format and writing in a neutral tone.

I will tell students it is now time for them to write their own review. They will only need to write a couple of sentences maximum next to each section which we previously defined. They can choose any movie they like, a TV series, or they can imagine one. They can copy sentences from the original text if they need, the main thing is that they write. I will move between students and provide help when they need it.

Content Feedback (0-5 minutes) • To facilitate student-to-student feedback about the ideas presented in their written reviews.

Students will be told to discuss what they wrote in their review, and why they chose to do so. I will model discussion with one of the students, and then pair them up and give them four minutes. I will then elicit some ideas in OCFB.

Language Feedback (0-5 minutes) • To facilitate student-to-student feedback about whether their reviews have the right features and layout taught during intensive text work.

I will mark the Ebert review against the checklist, modelling assessing it. I will hand out the checklist, and get students to swap reviews. They will go through the checklist and mark if the review they are reading has met the criteria.

Delayed Error Correction • Provides an opportunity to fix some spoken errors from the students, whilst also highlighting sentences where they spoke well.

NOTE: I will only undertake this activity if there is sufficient time. I will take erroneous sentences relevant to the target language that they produced in the session, and write them on the board, but I will also write a correct sentence on the board amongst them. I will ask them if each is correct or incorrect. If the sentence is incorrect, I will invite them to come up to the board and correct it. I will close by asking if there is anything they want to clarify and thanking them for their time.

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